All Comments on 'Fatal Attraction'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Pleaaaaaase continue the story!

writing3342writing3342over 10 years ago
Love it!

Hey, it's a great start! Please post the next chapter soon!

KittenCuddlerKittenCuddleralmost 11 years ago
Promising Start!

Please continue this story as I would love to know what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Solid start but please

get an editor. Couple of grammar issues. Need more flow and explaining of other character like Thanos and why would a woman give up her child?

MaynessMaynessabout 11 years ago
Good start

Got a lot of potential, looking forward to the next chapter. Well done. Thank you.

inspector123inspector123about 11 years ago
This look promising

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great!

Post again soon! So excited to see what happens

Violent_DelightsViolent_Delightsabout 11 years ago
Very Good!

Well written and excitingly tantalizing! I cannot wait for the next chapter.

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