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freeman64freeman64over 8 years ago
Nice beginning

Hi, nice first chapter. Keep it up. Waiting for subsequent parts and wondering how it unfolds.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Needs an editor

I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. There are way too many errors.

favourite_fantasyfavourite_fantasyover 8 years ago
intrigued

look forward to read more

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