by chris99999
This is another outstanding story flawlessly written. Characters are perfect. I will read it again.
Thank you.
Dad who reads this will want to have sex with his daughter and vice versa
Excellent, nice build and leaving it open for more chapters. Thanks again.
Well written, believable, kept my interest. I only wish you had intimated at the end, that they had both expressed interest in continuing their trysts in the future.
The writing was great, I hate it when a story goes from 1 to 11. Needs time to build up. The world building was a tad much, but overall fantastic read
Good pacing, great dialog, not violent & arousing storyline. Please write more stories.