All Comments on 'Father and Son Moments'

Enjoyed reading your story. Please don’t be too redundant, going around and around, not moving forward. I was reading one story here that was about two friends,now college roommates. I got through 12 chapters and they still hadn’t seen each other nude. It was writing for the sake of writing. Talk about redundancy!

Gifted writers often forget continuity.

Love how Father and Son chat with each other and can be so explicit with each other - again well written Rob - can't wait to get into Roadside Assistance!

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD. This was the best chapter so far! I feel terrible saying it but...damn, those awkward father-son situations were hot as hell! :)

This was really sweet and fun to read, because I've really grown to like Jake.

Anyway, thanks for the update! I can't wait for more!