All Comments on 'Father & Son, Mother & Daughter'

This is the very best story on Literotica I have read it had me in tears too.

This is the best romance story I've ever read. I'll admit its not something I would expect on this site. But I cried when it came to an end. It could have been 300 pages and it would not have been enough. Harlequin books only would wish they could have this great of a writer. Thank you so very much for this story..

I enjoyed reading your story.

Thank you

You have written a great story well plotted and with well developed characters. I look forward to reading more.

A very sweet and loving romance story with a lot of hot explicit sex.

The story could use a bit of editing to clean up some of the misspellings, but the mistakes didn't deter from the good read.

Thanks for the story

Firstly, I really DID like the story - pretty implausible set of coincidences in the way it started and finished, but what the hell...it was fun!

However, the changes of tense early on, the narration suddenly changing from third person to first (Rich becoming "I"), very poor punctuation and all the typos ("heals" instead of "heels," and "shuttered" instead of "shuddered" as just two examples) really broke up the story far too much for my peace of mind. Remember that this story is in the "Romance" category - don't focus on your liking for really hairy cunts to the detriment of the story itself, or you will find yourself relegated to the "Fetish" section.

Work with a good editor to tidy it up, repost it - and I'll give you five stars.

This was a great story, like a few people said there is a bit of grammar and structure issues but overall worth 5 Stars.

One item at the end is she is sleeping with the CEO not the President that is the daughter, but I knew what you were aiming for at that point.

Hope you can fix it and update

Too long for my taste.

There were a few cliches (an editor would have helped) but it still gets a five. Key West is a neat town.

That is so 1970’s. I hate hairy bushes on women. The author states that a shaved pussy makes a woman look like a child, what bullshit!. When a woman passes through puberty her genitalia grows significantly larger and ornate. You can’t really see that when she has “a full and bushy pussy”. Also I, like many other men, hate pulling pussy public hair out of our teeth, lol. We have no problem with a woman having a trimmed landing strip above her clit but hair below and that specially including anus hair, yuk! Pubic hair is crawling with fecal matter when she wipes her ass. Only an idiot would dive into a hair pussy!

I like hair on a woman! What I don't like is shaved pussy to look like a child. I want a woman NOT a kiddy. I didn't like the word cunt, to me it's a derogatory put down of a woman.

Dreadful spelling, grammar, dropped words, point-of-view changes. No way this rates as high as it did.

On the other hand the one complaining about the pubic hair being full of feces is himself full of feces.

But there is no doubt you need an editor in the worst way. Just way too many completely avoidable mistakes that a good editing would have eliminated. I did like the story, I still think it’s worth 3 stars.

Excellent plot and characters. Yes, some minor clean-up would help, but doesn't detract from the overall story.

This author has a hairy pussy fetish! I wonder if he like his women with hairy legs and armpits! He probably like them with hairy asses as well. Most men prefer their women shaved everywhere. It is more hygienic.

Nice story. Good believable characters and an interesting situation with the parents and children independently falling for each other. Yes it is badly edited, but that did not get in the way of the story too much. I can’t complain, my own editorial skills are abysmal.

Maybe it’s my age, but I much prefer hairy bushes to shaved pussies.

"Father & Son, Mother & Daughter:" - The theme (plot) of the story is rather unique, quaint and beyond expectations of Fate. Being the romantic that I am, I found this romance tale to be greatly charming, elegant and spicy. As of today--June 05, 2023--I've read each comment, I'm in agreement that and Editor is sorely needed with the many words that are not misspelled, but misused. Words such as "heals" should have been "heels'--twice; "may" was used for "made" and many others caused the reader an unnecessary pause as they attempted for figure out, guess, what the author is meaning to say because words were misused.

I did love the theme; the romance was truly awesome! Scoring the tale was difficult, but stretching my boundaries of grading a story I awarded the story a generous Four (4) Stars...because I loved the love and romance, and the plot, angels so well. Like other readers I do suggest an Editor; the quality of the story will be greatly enhanced.

What a wonderful story - managing the suspense was brilliant!