All Comments on 'Father/ Daughter Dance'

by Tawdrydad

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Short and sweet, sometimes is better I liked it. If I may......you NOD your head yes, you do not shake it. Her pussy SHONE in the moonlight, not shined and its CHEEK not check.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

hot!! now if they could only arrive home to find sonny plowing to his hot milf mom. Thehot fam fourway ensues. Plenty of potential here for carnal mixing. Seems like there are some other hoy,horny couples sat the dance. Cannot wait for the next episode.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Not bad, I liked it. I had a different ending though, as they left the classroom the other father he talked to was walking towards them with his daughter. He said, "This rooms unlocked.", and smiled and nodded as they passed each other."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A little immature and barely credible, especially her going back with a pussy full of come and no knickers on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Reminds me of the " PAST " !!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Read all three of your tales.You write a damn good short story.Sometimes less IS more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hot

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