All Comments on 'Father Figure'

...But I couldn't figure out if Noel was her father or her roommate. I can't be aroused and confused at the same time. Sorry.

Very very well written. Great plot.. and build up. Had me more than aroused. -winks-

I liked this enough to want a part 2. :)

It started off really promising -- I liked that there was a bit of a plot and the sex was good but... I couldn't figure out who Noel was. Was it her roommate that played into her Daddy fantasy? It just wasn't clear.

This story was interesting because most incest stories I read are not story in story.I read this and made my boyfriend read it to, and damn if it wasn't unanimous, we love this erotic piece I hope you write more...ill be waiting!~ana<3

i like the decent into a fantasy well written keep it up.

This story didn't match the description at all. I think you might have mixed up two stories and placed this with the wrong description and in the wrong category.