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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

A few small typo/spelling errors, but certainly off to a good start. Is mom in the picture to add another perspective regarding discipline and perhaps training?

SaintisidoreSaintisidoreabout 3 years ago

This had the potential to be great. This could have been a lot longer. There are so many more things that they could do as long as their father doesn't find out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please post a second chapter. This was intense!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
a 2nd Chapter

Please make a 2nd chapter to this. It was good.

SoNaughtySoNaughtyabout 3 years ago

I don't know if my comment went through or not, but the story was really hot. Not boring to me at all!

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I'm amused by writing about highly improbably and unlikely scenarios. I'm open to writing around idea submissions-even for my own characters.

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