All Comments on 'Faux Realm Ch. 06'

by KalDarov

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taco1085taco1085about 6 years ago
bravo

wonderful chapter, way to short but loved everybit of it. I wonder when Ericha and Liza and LIn will realize that the writing on Lucian went also to Ericha....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I give up...

I am sorry but I found the 6 chapters I have read a struggle so I am quitting.

Overall, it seemed disjointed and the phrasing seemed odd in places with some sentences missing words or using odd words. This kept me from being able to follow the flow of the story.

KalDarovKalDarovabout 5 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous

Sorry about the story. I apologize about my ineptitude to form coherent stories. I hope I did not ruin your love of reading and you try someone better than I am. I really want to thank you about your comment though. Stay safe.

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