All Comments on 'Faux Realm Ch. 10'

This story is great not perfect but still amazing read a couple of mistakes mostly spelling or using redundant plurals stuff like that still a great read please don’t stop writing take a break think up the next chapter but don’t stop

The concept of this story is good. I think having an experienced editor would benefit it greatly. The characters reactions are fequently very extreme and seem to contradict themselves often. The second in command for example, in a murderous rage after having to execute the 6 crew, running up to the bridge only to rescue the clearly insane captain at the end. It doesn't really make sense.