by Texican1830
Them boys in Texas sure know how to treat a predator. Iβve read many February stories, but this oneβs different, itβs got real men in it. Itβs got women who are true, have honor, & committed to their men. Excellent story. πππππ 5 stars from me.
Alan D.
Was the last senrace a quote from somthing else otherwise it didn5 really make much sense?
In the movie Pure Country, George Straitβs character says that to Buddy, who has been impersonating him. Georgeβs friends used to use that line on him a lot, and vice-versa
There, that is a great story and besides that it could be true. I enjoy reading a story where the men act like a man should act. These days most men in the United States would wring their hands and whine like they are from England or someplace if their wife danced with the asshole before leaving the husband a cuckold. These men took care of the situation like a man should. Back when I was in my 30's a man beat the hell out of an asshole who hit on his wife. And if by some chance the husband got the shit beat out of him at least he could say he fought for his wife, and if she left with the asshole then the divorce was on her. And she would have to face her family and neighbors with shame after she cheated on her husband. Try explaining that to her children when they hear what a slut their mom is.
There, I gave this story 5 stars, I like reading a story where a man acts like a man should. These days most American men would whine and wring their hands if their wife danced with that asshole before leaving the husband "just for one night" to be a slut for a minor celebrity. Back when I was in my 30's you beat the hell out of a guy trying to hit on your wife.
Really don't like it, just a celebration for being Texan I guess. I'm from Alaska, the actual biggest state so I know the difference.
mfbridges.....you from Alaska? Did you build the damn state? Did you buy it from russia? Then, shut tha fuck up and read some more free stories. Man must have a small penis.......you sure you don't play football and sit on the sideline with a sore pinky?
Sorry, guys, but I'm from Jersey (the state, not the island.) I've lived in Texas for 32 years. But it still amazes me that people pick on Texans. This is the way the asshole should have been treated. The Bear heartily approves. But yo only get four stars. Not enough violence to the pig. Now if this was New Jersey.......
The BEAR
Oh yeah, I like your story much better. Believe me, I have seen some men much more dangerous to tangle with than pro football players. Some men deal with death and not a game. 5*
This 71 yer old Marine laughed my A$$ off .I am only 5-10 but that as wipe would have had his knees destroyed,not just his pinkie and toe.
Lol thats Texas for ya. This one really brings out why this would never happen. A football player would never put themselves in a position to ruin their career. Idk about all teams but there are rules preventing this exact scenario
You totally missed the whole idea of the February sucks thought experiment, the idea wasn't to write your characters out of the awful circumstances the original purposed, but rather to write different ways for them to deal with the feelings that the circumstances caused as well as the other characters involved. You didn't have to think about the emotional turmoil or the effects on all the relationships and lives of the characters, you just sidestepped the difficulty and challenge all together. It's like writing about dealing with life after a nuclear holocaust by simply saying the bombs never dropped, you effectively took the modern woke ideology route of the snowflake generation by ignoring the issues and avoiding the hard work. Your writing is great but you totally missed the entire premise of the FS project.
Anon - You totally missed the introduction. Try again: There is zero resemblance between the fictitious characters herein and those George Anderson so carefully crafted in his much-imitated classic, and only one has the same name. Assume this happened after ol' Marc got traded, maybe, and understand that the Texans herein may lack some of the qualities of introspection and thoughtful consideration the original characters possessed. It's a lark, folks, so relax and take it in that vein.
Many a Big Texan have tried to be like your story and have 9 times out of 10 been punked because they are too arrogant to see they don't live in the real world, but they are feeling no pain because they are too inebriated with their texas lore to know they were outclassed in every way.
Guess all these folks have phd's in psyc... They seem to have All the answers., NOT., F-UM.. ITS AN AMATUER SITE FOLKS. U DONT LIKE THE STORY TOUGH SHIT. SAVE YOURSELF THE TROUBLE OF READING ANYMORE STORYS HERE.. OK... THAT WAY YOU CAN KEEP UR B. P. DWN A NOTCH.. HATE 4 YEA TA STROKE OUT OVR THE ** FREE** STORYS FOUND HERE... THAT WERE DARN LUCKY TA HAVE IN THE FIRST PLACE.. SO.. THK U TX FOR YOUR STORYS AND TIME.. DONT KNOW R CARE BOUT IDIOT COMMENTS MY SELF.. MOST R ANA. ANYWAY.. PLZ KEEP UM COMIN IN YEA WOULD.. ALOT OF THE OTHER * OLDTIMERS* ARENT HERE ANYMORE.. RETIRED I GUESS R GOT TIRED OF A-HOLES COMMENTS.. ANYWAY IM OFF MY SOAP BX TAKEN MY MEDS.. GOING BK TO READIN. THKS.. NOW.. YALL HAVE A DANDY DAY... STAY SAFE.. βοΈπππ―π―π―π―πππππ€·π€·πβοΈβοΈππππ»π
10 stars for a fantastic version done Texas Style! LOL Whoa. I loved this tale. Thanks Buster2U
I'm not a Texan, hell, I'm not even American but I loved this and if this is what Texans are like then they definitely are my kind of people. Full marks to the author and to the characters, especially the ladies who understood the value of loyalty and what's important in life rather than aspiring to get a famous man's cock inside them. George Anderson, read and learn!
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What is that poster below the author's comment on? His comment read like he'd fallen out of the pretentious twat tree and hit every branch on the way down! He clearly didn't get what the author was trying to do here but I certainly did.
I have never known anything from Texas that was worth a shit. I say let them secede and we can build a wall around them.
Top Five I am sure about it! ***** and that out of over 50+ versions Great Job TEX