Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
"Become fuck-buddies?"
"If that is all there is, then I will gladly accept that as much better than what I have now, and I truly believe better than what you now have. Maybe after a little time, that can grow."
"But you still have your memories of the wonderful night with Marc."
"You will find it hard to believe, but I have shut the turd from my mind. After you sued him and gave the complaint to the team, Marc told everyone that I was a slut who picked him up because I lusted for his body and wanted my 15 minutes of fame. What evidence did I have to counter him? Nothing. He went from being my greatest sex to my greatest revulsion. I just don't think about him anymore, except how I hate him because of the greatest husband that I lost because of him. On the other hand, when I watch something on the tube alone at night or go to bed alone, I still have the warm fuzzy feeling of being with you, of you putting your arm around me, talking about whatever came to our minds to talk about. I miss the comfort that you brought to us. That is what I remember and what I miss, not Marc."
We remained silent for a bit. Linda kept looking at me with her hopeful eyes. I finally had to answer.
"If I had never known you and just ran into you somewhere, I think we could become friends, and maybe even marry, just as we actually did years ago. But I don't think I can forget the humiliation and shame you brought upon me. I felt emasculated, and still feel that. Maybe you have been able to rewire your memories but I can't. Even now, I have long forgiven you, but every time I look at you I still see you with Marc's cock in what was supposed to be reserved for me and me only. Every time I see his team's logo, my mind shifts, if only for a moment, to you abandoning our special night and leaving me for another man. You wrote to me twice that sex with Marc was better than anything I ever did for you. How can I be comfortable with you with that knowledge?"
"Maybe you need not forget but change perspective. If you think of him, recognize that you beat him. Marc does not have me and never will. He has been forced to leave town. You won. You are the winner. You are still in town and he is not. You have me and he cannot. I love you and I despise him. That is maybe what you should see when you hear his name and see the team logo or see me."
I was thinking through her words as Linda's eyes started watering, "I can only hope that you are too young to be celibate and you will need to fuck someone. Just view me as someone that is available when and where you need it. Like a whore or an escort that you can call upon, but totally free, clean, exclusive and loving."
She still was a goddess. What could I say? "Maybe."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 days agoThe only reason Lol nda now thinks badly of Marc is because he publicly called her a slut, spoiling in her head her fantasy evening. It hurt her fragile female ego that’s rather than being whisked away by a fairytale prince for a wild night of passion she was just a slit he fixked one night who wasn’t special at all. Suddenly Jim’s her dream guy because he loved her.
And on the whole ‘ego’ thing, there’s about three or four references to Jim’s fragile male ego, telling him to get over his ego and suchlike but let’s remember when she talked about Jim taking time to work things out, to do what he needed to move on she said ‘Pkease don’t take a lover, that would kill me’ So, she expects his ego to get over it but couldn’t stand the shoe being on the other foot so to speak.
Women’s egos (and girls) are far more fragile than a guys, they worry about their looks, ass size, bust size, weight, getting older and not being attractive to others (even when married). Far more fragile and far more unforgiving.
And the whole wanting Jim to eat Marc’s come out if her, total disrespect and reason alone to divorce her and stay away from her. In that respect the end of your story spoilt it.
Anonymous4 days agoThat was four pages of drivel, clearly you don't have the skill or talent to write. After reading this it amazes me the you have the cheek to write negative comments on other peoples stories.
Anonymous4 days agoSorry but this is not a good version. There a little sections of good in it but overall the writing is very bad.
I think the point you are trying to make is that Jim initially wanted to see if he could make things work but soon found out that Linda was either forever changed by Marc or was never the person he thought she was. It kind of misses the mark in amongst the bad writing though and the way you opened it up to reconciliation at the end undermines the whole thing.
Anonymous24 days agoYour first three paragraphs were so mired in gramatical mish-mash it's a wonder anyone read further other than to see where this FS rewrite would end up. Somewhat like watching a car crash - you know it's going to be bad but you just keep watching out of morbid curiosity.
