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And that's how essentially I'd end the story. Jim breaks it off with Ellen, who understands but she has a similar attachment to Jim like how Marc did with Linda. But ultimately, both Jim and Linda know who they belong to. And with the new experiences and emotional scars they have carrying on their backs they can both move forward by making love. Not fucking and showing the new tricks the other knows, but make that special kind of love that only they know with each other.
Well that was long, but yea. I wrote this because I was just rereading one of these sequels and it got me thinking, what would I want to make this the perfect read for me? And I got to talking to myself and one thing lead to me saying fuck it, and I decided to write this between 11 PM - 1 AM on a work night. Because ultimately, I just love this story and many of its interpretations.
For a while, Literotica became stale for me and I could not find good stories for me to go back to, or the ones I liked were no longer there (I see you Metamorphose and I'm coming for your Wicked Series you bastard!) but Another Love by RichardGerald really lit up my interest once more, but it was February Sucks and its sequels that truly reignited my passion for reading stories like these.
And I guess this is just my thank you to all the wonderful work these authors put into these stories. I keep mentioning all these other stories and crediting these authors and even ones that had nothing to do with FS. But its only because I just absolutely love their works. I myself have a long way to go before I can even replicate a fraction of their power. This review is really my way of saying thank you.
So yea. Favorite me or the this review or don't. Let me know what you think of this piece in the comments section or don't.
Have a good one!
Oh and if you need my permission to use these ideas to make this better than I can, you have blessing and permish! Happy writing.
- COMMENTS
mfj7721 days agoWell . . . you attempted a review. It rambled so much, I gave up (a very rare thing for me to do). The author's complete disregard for all the BTB sequels is disappointing. Too much violence? What world do you live in where there isn't too much violence EVERY day? I think the BTB endings speak to the outrageous, public betrayal of Jim by Linda (and friends). So, by ignoring those sequels, this author completely ignores the visceral impact of the original story.
James G 529 days agoYou lost any credibility as soon as you said "reconciliation.'
Neither the rest of this piece, nor anything else you have written is worth reading, no matter how well you may write, because your opinions and beliefs are trash and deserve nothing.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoThank you for your rambling diatribe on a crappy story kept alive by morons who think that they can fix the giant injustice heaped upon Jim.
To paraphrase someone I like - Anderson's FS is not a story to put down lightly. It should be thrown into the garbage heap with great force. And should be forgoten. To some of the comments below it doesn't have to be a BTB, but at the end of the day all a man really has is his self respect. Once you compromise that you've compromised everything. The worn out trope of staying for the kids sake has been scientifically disproven. Divorced children with involved parents do better than children in toxic environments.
Anyway I know my comments will not stop another author from wanting to do FS 'their way'. So sad.
FantasyTrain2 months agoTalk about STALE, this is the-best example!
You say you are not the best writer, I would say you are NOT a writer at all!
I am sure your boyfriend agrees!
