All Comments on 'Feels So Close Pt. 02'

I like the story, doesn’t seem rushed, and the characters are very authentic. I hope that if there is a chapter 3, it doesn’t take too long to submit.

Would that all young lesbians who fall in love with their best friends find it reciprocated. Certainly didn’t happen to me, but I’m happy for these two. Still a thousand bridges to cross, and I don’t know if you intend to continue with this story, but I’ll keep my fingers crossed that they make it. And I hope you keep writing!

Outstanding. Both part 1 and 2 are awesome. The sex is slow and sensual. I hope you are able to continue this storyline

Wonderfully captivating, highly erotic story that felt so good. Perfect ending if you have no more to add to this story - we can let our imagination run. Just hoping that you find the time to create more/share more with your readers. Thanks.

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There's a certain charm to the imperfections in the editing of this story. It gives the narrative the feel of an honest re-telling of a very personal relationship between best friends. I don't know if it would work so well if it was more polished.

I love the story, and the beautifully confusing natures of sex and love between friends. The combination is terrifyingly intoxicating.

Poignant, tense, erotic - wonderful tale. You could easily continue the Fiona - Brooke adventure, but if not, please do continue to contribute.

Wonderful job. I love the characters. The whole story is great, but part 2 really shows a lot of growth. I hope you continue to write

Excellent job. Love the characters. It would read something from Fiona's point of view.

Five stars for both chapters. I encourage you to please keep writing. A little more depth with your characters going forward would be great. I, more than most, understand how life can get in the way of writing. But you have a wonderful raw talent that, properly nurtured, will bloom into something beautiful.

Rose Monroe 🌹