by jjcolejr
I enjoy your longer chapters that tell the story of how the relationship builds like this one. I kept hoping that she would be pregnant with all the mention of it but I guess not.
I thoroughly enjoy a story with some length to it.
It gives the author time to develop his characters
and their activities, and it gives me time to get
acquainted with them.
This was a great example of a story that kept me
busy for a number of hours, and I loved it.
Please keep up the good work. Looking forward
to more.
Thanks, Bob T.