by jessymichelle
this is so good Lol too bad there is only 2 chapters I really like this story please consider writing more ! Please !
Outstanding beginning. I loved reading this first chapter of your story. It is an awesome start to what should be a outstanding story. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next part.
Love the characters. Hope you don't push things too hard, too fast - seems like a naive girl coming to the big city like this might have regrets and concerns about getting into this scene. It might be nice to have her worry a bit before jumping into bed. But I'm definitely looking forward to reading chapter 2.
Very good so far. You definitely need to post ch. 2 soon with a lead-in like that. The only thing I'm a tiny bit disappointed with is the title. It could've been a little more creative, but it's not a big deal.
Great story. I loved reading this & I can't wait to read the next part of this story. Hopefully you will not wait too long to post the next chapter.