All Comments on 'Feminization of Little Bro Ch. 02'

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angela_tvangela_tvalmost 3 years ago

My dream written..... I love it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

more, more

StephSiss1StephSiss1almost 3 years ago

Awesome story, I've created an account to add it in favorites

ChartlessChartlessalmost 3 years ago

Awesome begining hope to see more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It does not sound like english is your first language. In that case, you have done very well; if english IS your first language, you must squirt directly into your mouth every time you cum until you get an A in english class.

Angus74Angus74almost 3 years ago

Storyline isn't bad but you should have someone check for grammatical errors

DiaperboyMiDiaperboyMiover 2 years ago

Nice job on the first two chapters!!!! Good pacing anf dialogue! Can't wait to read more :-)

pantyhosefunpantyhosefunabout 2 years ago

Wish there was more to this story. I agree with the comment from 9 months ago.

Gothic5Gothic5over 1 year ago

Well, so far i have read these stories couple of time. Like others i am really waiting for future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

fantastic stories cant wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

And he went right into the bathroom and jacked off.

dreamer31adreamer31aabout 1 year ago

i could wait to cum poor guy hurry up with part 3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Are you gonna continue this? Please?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Darren, that's so sexy I'd love to be him

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