by Writie
It does not sound like english is your first language. In that case, you have done very well; if english IS your first language, you must squirt directly into your mouth every time you cum until you get an A in english class.
Storyline isn't bad but you should have someone check for grammatical errors
Nice job on the first two chapters!!!! Good pacing anf dialogue! Can't wait to read more :-)
Wish there was more to this story. I agree with the comment from 9 months ago.
Well, so far i have read these stories couple of time. Like others i am really waiting for future chapters.