All Comments on 'Fertility Temple, Milk Daughter'

As always, thank you for reading. Be well.

heyall

Well now that’s about as hot as it gets! But then that’s what we expect from HayAll! Enjoyed the twisted fantasy.

Another 5star work of art

Cheers

SAGE

Great story. Beautiful dad and daughter and great mom

Great story, terrific writing as usual!

If asked, I would have said you didn't write this. It may have been your idea, but you have a distinctive style. No matter your alias, the pacing, sentence structure, words and vocabulary, are all recognizable.

Please keep this story going for a little bit.

Third in your "Touch the Pre-Columbian Idol in the Temple and Pay the Price" series. Fun stuff. However, you had Mom drink her milk and suddenly Mom starts producing milk as well. We assume Daddy bred his horny daughter but by all accounts, the fertility magic should have had her ready and horny, too, and bearing a babe at the same time as Clarissa. Fantasy logic. Ah, well. Amusing in any event.

Switching perspectives in my humble opinion weakened the narrative, especially by going from third-person to first-person.

Thanks for sharing. 4* Slainté

Its a great story and I loved it, but I was disappointed that the Mum didn't get pregnant too considering that she said that her body felt younger. Keep up the good work.

Would love a sequel with daughter’s horny pregnancy described in detail. Loved this!

great Tale, just wished there were pictures, LOL

This always soothese me for some reason...just that its gonna be alright. Could be the mention of the pandemic, yeah that's probably what it is...anyway, beautiful family friendly story with a powerful message. Please, keep up the great work. 🤔🥰

Its kinda like, after having her baby the temple's turned her into a verrry horny baby again herself, and she needs her mama and dada like always but something just a little different now...that's SO hot!!!

P.s. - I hope she kept her added "tittty milk-size". 🤔🔥🤔🔥

Great story concept. I've not come across like it on this site. Keep 'em cumming . . .

Great story, as usual, but a little devoid of content (detail) on the actual sexual intercourse. . . .

It's just a story, I get it. Still, a fertility temple that evokes sexual desire in mother and daughter towards each other is somehow silly and too "new age". Fat chance getting pregnant by lezzing with each other.

Super erotic. though what about the child? how do they grow up? maybe a 15-20 jump in time to round it off. Love the way they get so turned on by nursing....