by Toucamingo
Loved this story, wonderfully crafted. Gentle and mystical, that may be the forest and animals. Still lovely!
This is, without doubt, the best short story on the site! Wonderfully evocative; warm, loving and sensuous, it fills one with peace love and hope! I know it has been quite a while since you posted but please: COME BACK!! ❤️
My heart immediately went out to Helen: she seemed to embody the gentle soul which I so rarely find in humans. I loved how you captured the image of Sarah as a woman living in harmony with nature. And in the end, the story left me with inspiration, a smile on my face and a sense of peace in my heart. I daresay that the situation which Helen wound up in is a slice of my personal heaven.
Another beautiful & romantic story. Very well & nice written!