All Comments on 'Fiancés Seductive Sister'

Good premise.

Mechanical sex.

Lacks tension.

Three stars.

4 Stars. Good story, though I'm not a fan of HUGE boobs, her breasts could be C's and the story could still go on the same way.

A "fiancé" is a man. When it's a woman, the word is "fiancée." You also need an apostrophe in the title.

so seductive and smart of her . Good plot and theme. She stayed in control with power over him, to get what she wanted. Loved the st6ory!

My brother in Christ, you need an editor

10.5 inch...fucking hilarious

The measurements all around were a bit wonky, and it didn't have as much emotion as it feels like it should've. Also, it feels half finished. Still okay go at it. 3*