All Comments on 'Fiery Redheads'

This was a pretty good story but I feel like it could have been better with a few minor changes like there being more build up, and perhaps the brother discovering his twin sisters secret and being a little conflicted, rather than being instantly okay with it.

In saying that though I still loved reading it, you are a very talented writer.

Great story, but isn’t fucking your twin sister incest too? So why would the Kathleen care anything at all about how illegal it is to fuck their little brother when she is taking a dildo fucking from her own twin sister???

Would definitely love to see more chapters.

Fantastic! I want more, please!

FYI, such as this.

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Kathleen leaned over and kissed his cheek softly, her now wet lips cold against his skin. The

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touch did send a shiver through him, all the way down to his cock that was waking up again after the intense release prior.

Very enjoyable, I'm a fan of the twins and also the older sisters taking care of a younger brother.

Very nice! Hot and sexy as hell!

I enjoyed this story very much.

This story is really hot! I love the twin part of it and the DP especially! I hope there is at least one more chapter with parts with just the girls together! Keep up the great work!

At first I was wondering what it was about but once you get half way through the first page it really pick up and I love it

The beginning is a mess. Awkward sentences, it goes on and on about how Dougie is a good boy and all the characters keep telling him to stay out of trouble. Most of that could have been cut. Could have started the story at the bathroom scene and slipped in some back story. Needs a good editor to help clean it up. There is a lot of potential here, but it also needs a lot of work.

So Hot and sexy, many men would love to have sisters like that, loved it, ignore the negative comments.

This story was a great one I'd love to see more added to it. I enjoyed the vivid detail and outstanding work it took to create such a lewd story. If you can please continue it.

Loved the story.

I would love to read chapter 2.

Really enjoyed this and looking forward to the next chapter. But you need someone to edit your work. You introduced the mom with green eyes....and then a couple paragraphs later said the twins had blue eyes just like the mom.

K and C become lovely and desirable through the rendering of the author. Their brother is in an enviable position.

there has not been keyholes for many years now

loved it hope for more chapters.

I love red heads, green eyed or blue. There were a few errors along those lines but because the story was told sooo well, you are forgiven. Please continue this tale. I'm looking forward to the rest of the week... or two..

Over all, you are a very good writer. And as far as the keyhole is concerned, you did comment on the house being old. I live in a 100 + year old farm house and a few interior doors still have the old keyhole locks.

Red heads, with long legs. Now that's HOT,little Dougie what a lucky sister~fucker.

PLEASE keep this story going, they still have one and a half weeks to go.

Well done, nice read. Big THANKS

You have let me enjoy an experience i have dreamed w my best to you

Kris L

I agree that a good editor would help. I caught the green eye/ blue eye switch about mom. Also the incest of the sisters is incest...... incest not limited to heterosexual couplings. The old house with keyholes in the doors didn't bother me. You have talent, but in this story it is rather raw and undeveloped.

Nobody ejaculates into a uterus (womb.) Likewise, the only bit of the vagina which is externally visible is the introitus; that requires the labia to be held open.

Some elementary anatomy research would be a good thing.

Great story wish for more between these siblings and I can’t believe the bad comments about an erotic story, are you reading it for erotica or to just critique

Excellent story would like to hear more