All Comments on 'Fifteen More Minutes of Fame'

by FranklinSwoon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great Read.

You have a hell of a start Don't stop now and make sure you keep the story moving and erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
not good in any way

delete and stop writing you suck at it.

heellovr69heellovr69over 10 years ago
Quite a series

This is quite a good read. Filled with twists and turns, it makes you wonder "What the hell is coming next?" Can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Please keep us intrigued!

Paxo1944Paxo1944over 10 years ago
Great Story

I loved this story, as other replies suggested with the twists and turns it keeps the readers attention. Ignore the 'Anonymous' derogatory comment, it's not worth worrying about. Looking forward to the next chapter.

MaternalyObsessedMaternalyObsessedover 10 years ago
* * * * *

Hahahaha I love this.

Fact: Not all family's play well together

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More please

I want more please. It just getting interesting and you can't leave us hanging like this. So I hope you continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thanks for a great story

Great story. P L E A S E do NOT die or disappear off the planet BEFORE

you have completed this story. This is a great story. Thanks. Did I say, great story!!

kaidmankaidmanover 10 years ago
dynamite

please continue its a great tale you have here and I am very intrigued its like lightning in a bottle

cliptoecliptoeover 10 years ago
Outstanding!

Hilarious, hot, and now so intriguing! Please continue this sordid saga! Cant wait for the Senator to get their spin on family values.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More

More. Need more.

trite_readertrite_readerabout 10 years ago
What?

An actual story with a plot, humour and twists and stuff on Literotica?!? I must have more!!! 5 stars for you author!!!

HAHAHAHA it's awesome as well to see the "not good in any way" moron commenting below as well! Where you been buddy? Suck much dick lately?? lol

BfreetorunBfreetorunabout 10 years ago
This would be good for at least one more chapter, maybe more than that.

Who among us has not had problems with relating to hypocritical parents, fake religious freaks (some of them sincere, no doubt but most not) not to mention the TV preachers like Alamo (still in prison) and a lot of others who are fornicators and pedophiles. Even the best of them need to be taken down a notch or two. Not to mention hypocritical politicians who lie and cheat for a living and screw the whole country. I think two more chapters would be about right. I would like to see the Senator prosecuted for something and lose most of her fortune. How about it, Franklin?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

you are one sick ( M.F.)

ju8streadingju8streadingabout 5 years ago

i want to read about this cunts down fall.

more please

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
Good stuff

Senator Mom got hers! Why do I think most politicians are like this? Probably a fault of mine I guess.

linnearlinnearalmost 4 years ago
Great Second Chapter

I hooked big time.

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 2 years ago
great

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

this is unironically the best story ever written

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