All Comments on 'Fifty Dollars'

by Ed0613

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
looks like im first

hi just read the story fifty dollars this was After reading

"granny" as I tend to check out the author page of stories I enjoyed the story in itself was to be honest a little lacking in backgrond as if you were in a hurry to get to the sex part not always the best but het to each his own with it being based in a condo development surely he would have had other offers of payment in kind the ideas I have had included the bored stay at home wife the rich retired and the just lonely blocked up the sink with clay artist type to name a few I realise that this is one of your older stories but in storie land nobody needs to get older regards and luck with your future writings

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hot

like the other comment i read this after grannyi thought this was very good as well

oldtwitoldtwitalmost 4 years ago

Great story full of good old sex and many a mans dreams

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...