by Ashson
I'm glad the spanking didn't make it into the story. Spanking isn't my thing (and no, I've never tried it). I liked this story. It seems to me that Sylvia had the best of two worlds: She had hot, impromptu sex with her neighbor, and she got to claim it was non-consensual. Win, win. An extra bonus was that it was exhibitionist, to boot. Don't think for a minute that Sylvia didn't know the front door was wide open. Women tend to notice such things. A suggestion: You should write some more exhibitionist stories! Potential exposure is so much hotter than spanking; at least it is for me! 5*, of course. ~~ JBE
Advice your protagonists could benefit from more often. A well written story spoiled for many by being rapey.
It's clear that this author does not give a fig for social proprieties or courtship rituals that comprise the backbone of decent society.
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Platinum banter and heated liasons shall have to suffice.
Ergo the obvious score
Full marks *****
I loved this story!
I've almost been this demonstrative, but I always had buy in.
It seemed she was wet already... Was she busy in the shower?
This reminds me of times when I would act up or backtrack at my grandparents, a friend of my grandpa would always say that maybe I needed put over his knee.