All Comments on 'Fighting For Her Ch. 03'

This is good so far, looking forward to the next chapter!

I really like this series, especially how you didn't just jump into the sex. I would love to read more.

You're in dire need of an editor. This is rough. Good premise and I like the flashbacks, but it's about as rough as rough can be.

If not a little dark, but I'm loving it. Looking forward to the next chapter!

You have written some excellent work. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work and don't listen to some dumbass that probably can't write to start with.

keep going or what??

Where's Chapter 4? Although I am not usually into stories that are ONLY girl-on-girl ( although do appreciate SOME girl-on-girl action - hey, I AM a GUY, so... ) this story is nice. Like a romantic story of hesitant love between a guy and a girl, but between two girls instead.

Good. But where is Ch.4?? It`s really intereistig .

Please write chapter four! This is way more interesting than a lot of other lesbian romance stories on here. <3

Please please please write more! i love it!!

great story I m looking forward to chapter 4

Thiss Storyy Is So Awesomee Pleasee Wriitee Moree.!

This chapter has been out for about 8 months! how can you just abandon a story in the middle of it? seriously, i was getting into it too. >:(

Why did you abandon this story...):

iv never been the stalker type but the way i check up to see if this story is updated it just plain sad, thats how good this story is, please continue...do it for the children?

Write more PLEASE. its been a year since this has came out. Where is the 'to be continue" chapter?

Please don't leave this story. It is to damn good.

I was really getting into it :)

Continue this

It is a great story, but to leave it hanging. Not fair. please , at least, continue the scene.

I'm sorry I've been out of the radar for the past couple months, school is school. BUT! I will finish this story along with Mission of the Heart. I've been writing like crazy for the past two days and I already have at least ten pages worth of this story. And I'm going to write more of this tonight, and hopefully submit this when I'm done editing, etc.

A little hint: all my stories' character or characters are somehow tied together.

Just keeps getting better

Omg tht was like totally awesome please keep going i want to know what happens next and thxs for introducing me to hollywood undead this love this hate is the shit the other day i was hearing black dahalia and just reminded me of this story so please keep going i hope they end up together in the end

But a little tense.