All Comments on 'Fighting for Her'

Even short, it explains the man's position on marriage and women's need for endless extreme demonstrations. It's a game women learn as little girls, and usually master by 25.

The fact the sister jumped on him about fighting for his wandering wife just highlights the sense of entitlement so many (if not all modern women have) . The MC was spot on with his thinking.

Why is it the man’s job to ‘fight’ for a wife with a wandering high? Women are not children who need supervising or monitoring to keep them acting properly. Women are as capable of men at knowing what the right thing to do is. Along with entitlement comes responsibility.

Loved the ‘after she had explored her feelings’ a politically correct and romanticised way of saying ‘after she had fucked him’

Had the chance of something better but wanted hubby has a fallback, good for him he didn’t give her thsy option,

That is how you fo it.

Story had potential but fell a bit flat in the end. On the other hand he is correct about not fighting as she would have had him in circles. Sometimes who really cares is the best revenge…

Most men I know would’ve walked as well but maybe just maybe a little reminder to Tom as he spends some time healing his busted up face and kicked in balls

Made a lot of sense. Had the correct outcome - Divorce.

I actually think this is an honest book about marriage in general.

Oh go through it once. If she sees other guys she is a whore and not worth getting upset. Toss her out the door and move on. Any cunt too stoopid to honour her owe needs a fresh start with a new sucker

sbrooks103x3 days ago

@Anonymous Re: "the definition of "fighting" apparently is just letting her explore her feelings without any consequences to their relationship

Umm, did you read my comment?.. I obviously know what they meant by "fight" for her🙄🙄🙄.. I even said how is it going to work when he's the only one fighting for the relationship?.. reading is fundamental 😂😂😂😂.. I clearly know what they meant by "fighting" for her.. you seem to be the confused one sir/ma'am..

@Anonymous Re: :Just OK. - No I don't think she's fucked Tom yet. That's what she'll be doing to "explore her feelings for him."

I agree with sbrooks103x. She wanted more time to explore her feelings with Tom. She probably did fuck him, just not admitting to it. And she shouldn't be allowed to "explore her feelings" for him, as she shouldn't want to do that in the 1st place. She's married. Having an affair, even emotional, results in problems & often divorce. Furthermore, her husband's correct, in my viewpoint. He shouldn't have to fight for her again after years of marriage. For his wife to put him in that position shows, no matter what she says, how much love & respect she actually doesn't have for hubby. Good story, especially being a short one. 4 stars Bob

Mark should fight for his marriage & wife. What about Jinny fighting for HER marriage & husband? She's wanting to "explore" her feelings for Tom which shouldn't be happening at all in a marriage. She says she loves Mark, but it she really did, she wouldn't be asking for more time in her "exploration". Shows lack of love, respect, and honor of her husband. The only thing the story didn't convey: Mark met Tom one night unexpectedly, busted his balls, cracked a rib or 2, & did some damage to his handsome face. And in disguise, Tom never knew what hit him, or who. Jinny felt entitled and lost a husband as a result.

Excellent flash story. Nice short warning, interesting topic and dialogs, decisive main character.

Well done, Sir.

Thanks for sharing.

Nicely played sir!

5 star - I agree 100% with this story.

Once you establish a monogamous relationship, either by marriage or pre-nupt contract - the fighting to maintain that relationship is over - forever - period - end of discussion. It should be an equal opportunity to continue to express sharing and love towards each other for the rest of your lives.

Good read . Sound arguments. Entirely fitting end .

5 *

DK

To me this idea of "Fighting for your marriage" is wrong.

The reason being is for the document referred to as a "Marriage License". This, to a degree, gets classed in with a Driver's License.

You can get into trouble and 'Temporarily' lose your driver's license. But you know you will get it back. And really? All to often people still drive[remain married] even when they screw up.

Then you have the so called 'Legal System' that all to often penalize the man in the dissolution of a 'Marriage' or as it were 'Revoking the Marriage License'. As if the man were fully and solely responsible for the parties on the 'License' to follow the rules and laws.

Not unlike your son or daughter getting a driver's license and you lose yours, pay a huge fine and/or end up in jail because they drove drunk or stoned.

Then we come to the penalty portion where women seem to, for the most part, be treated as if this were 17th, 18th or 19yh century and not fully able to get a job and earn their keep. So the man gets hammer with all the bills, paying the ex and child support. [Although children do need to receive the best care they can.]

I think the Marriage License should be changed to a 'Marriage Contract' with some standard terms and penalties laid out similar to any standard contract.

Both parties review the 'Contract' and any changes and or 'Prenupt' style penalties get placed within.

Once 'Married' both parties would sign the 'Contract' and go on to the reception and honeymoon.

In this fashion the 'Contract' can come up for review periodically and agreed to changes can be added or removed.

If you know in advance what the penalties are going to be you are more unlikely to violate the 'Contract'.

Should make for interesting arguments.

Good short story. Fight for your marriage/ wife? To a certain amount, yes. But on a continual basis... fuck no! Especially when the wife's having at least somewhat of an emotional affair with some guy & thinking of making it physical. The wife should also be fighting; if she doesn't, she can't love hubby all that much. Anyway, he fought for her when they dated & engaged, There's a limit to how much one sided fighting should be. 4 stars - one of the few short stories that works. Bob

Simple. I liked that. Basic storytelling. I get the author's idea, but if it was me, I would have messed the other guy after the divorce was final.

I get the fuck em and ignore em route, but I'm more petty than that and would expose them both to their HQ for inappropriate fraternization.

Shorter than I like, but it all rang true and mirrors the real attitude of many men. It deserves more than four stars, so I'll have to give it five.

Come on dude u got to have more of the story SMH

Just because you are married doesn't mean the fight is over, but you should both be fighting together

I think we all need to be reminded from time to time about real life - as constrasted with fantasy. Mark's right: Once you say the vows, the fight is over. At that point, it's about "You and me against the world." You work hard to do everything together. If there are "feelings you want to explore," that's an indicator that it's time to reconsider the groundrules.

I loved this story for the two dialogs. Sister and Jinny seem rooted in some old-fashioned, pseudo-macho view of marriage - or relationships in general. I agree with Mark's point of view. If the woman is cheating, or tempted to cheat, then it's important to talk to your partner. Whether you agree on open marriage, polyamory, or divorce, it's important that everyone is on the same page.

This should be a longer story

finally someone who gets it. he gave her what she was seeking.....divorce papers

Story said jewelry and dancing. That’s what I call fighting for her. Broom her.

Cinco....just barely.

Abso-fucking-lutely! *****

The only fight you should have to do is to keep your partner happy... And it's a Two Way Street. Love this one as the wife clearly wasnt. What was he expected to do?! Hang around and then step back if she decides the other guy is her twu wuv?

Right call by the MC. ID LOVE to have seen more, maybe the realisation of the wife but I have a feeling that self awareness may not be a strong suit for her character!

Short and to the point. Clear characters, clear action, and a fitting conclusion.

Keep 'em comin'.

Not much of astory and mc is right she had no business exploring feelings for another man and a player at thatand thinking he wouldtake her back after shefucked asswipe

Poignant and honest. Btw not she did led Jason Hadley on. See her reaction. She must have panicked when hubby showed up and let Jason get beat down. She is a flake who doesn't know what she wants.

Very good, author is spot on, as adults we make choices, choices have consequences, if a woman chooses to be a cheating slut, believing some scumbags bullshit, no-one can stop her, it's her free choice, dump the fuckin idiot and move on, it may hurt at first but it's better in the long run, unless you are a homo cuckold loser.

Good short story.To the point in everything . You presented a realistic scenario and the way a husband would have reacted to her behaviour. Short and to the point, no pages of endless repetitive dialog between wife or husband on trying to justify their choices. No stupid friends or relatives trying to get him to take her back..thank you for that,its a nice change...Lets face it,in real life Any friend or sibling would have said,dump her!! Unlike many other authors who try to make him question his resolve by having friends/family get on his case that HE is making a mistake by dumping a cheating wife...Good short story...5 stars..JZK..

Just walk away

Finally, a MC that can make the needed decision for all the right reasons.

Great story! Loved it!

Great story, very well written.

Very good story, thank you. 5 stars from Xluckylee

5* read. Thanks.

Very good.

Just ok, nothing special.

Eh not one of your better efforts. Kinda like a half story. Always well written though and still a fan

Fool

I rated it ar Four stars. I is a very short, simple story, but I still appr coated the writing. A bit better that Average.

JPB

Well at least he didn't wait to get a cream pie like lc69hunter or Ruttweiler would have....

enjoyed! Thanks for you writing.

Would be nice to fish this out. Almost like half a story and half an outline. But I like it. A marriage is not a place to explore romantic feelings for others...

It would be nice to get the details of how her exploration fell apart though

spot on

I agree Mark, a spouse shouldn't have to "fight" for their partners love, NO that is high school bullshit.

Don't get married guys, I'm telling you, DO NOT GET MARRIED

This concept of fighting for the stupid whore to feed her ego is total bullshit. He did exactly the right thing to dump her ass.

I sympathize and agree with the MC in principle. However, seeing through the game is not winning the game, as they say. Being right is not the same as winning either. You may lose anyway, but you won’t win unless you fight.

Meh what did Jinny expect. I know we all despise the "it was only sex" cliche, but the wife saying she has feelings for a guy and is several tempted and wants to explore, well that just kills a marriage immediately.

Great story but needs to be expanded

Good story but I agree with his decision. If your wife has to constantly pursued then that is not a marriage. I have been married for 57 years and we make sure we have private time several times a month. Walks, Picnics, movies and Dinner just to mention a few. And yes I did pursue her but we both took our vow seriously. And yes there have been some bumps in the road but never anyone else but her and I and the man upstairs

This man handled it perfectly

Looks like the right way to handle it to me.

Loved it. You want to explore your feelings? Fine. See ya. Short & sweet. Great, concise writing. 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s

A man exploring feelings with a married woman needs to explore the inside of the Emergency room

Perfect. Honey I guess while you’re exploring your “feelings” with Tom I’ll be exploring my feelings with Gloria. I really like the way she “feels”. Two can play the game.

5 stars from Xluckylee for an enjoyable read

A friend gave me wise words a long time agai.

"I WOULDN'T WANT A WOMAN ANOTHER MAN DIDN'T WANT TO FUCK.

IF CAN FUCK HER, HE CAN HAVE HER."

Without hope or better resolution or anything other than a brief summary, this feels empty and unenjoyable. Good setup, then just a summary of a wheezing sputter of an ending. 3*

5*****

His sister is a 100% cunt. My wife says some people need to be drowned at birth and she is one of them me I’m not that far gone. She shouldn’t have been conceived. There should be a test for parenthood

Oh yeh great writing 5stars

True story You should not have to fight to keep someone You are married to , its there choice , he did the smart thing she could not make up her mind and he left

Five stars to RePhil for his comments and five stars to Regguy69 for his succint tale.

5 stars, why would he fight when she isn't, it takes two people to make a marriage work, A great read thank you

5 stars.

I'm a fan of scorch-the-earth revenge and BTB. It's a surefire way to ensure that story ending is satisfying.

Regguy69 just showed that BTB, RAAC, or a very long story is not needed to achieve that.

A good read. Thanks for sharing.

One of the better stories I've ever read. He DID fight for her once and that shouild heve been enough. She had a choice, one can only hope she would realize her mistake before she chose wrong but she let her pussy do the thinking. Ces' la vie, welcome to a lonely loveless life,

Makes sense 100% Bro! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Like others, I'm usually a fan of scorching the earth and salting it, but this does work to a certain extent.

He is right. She gave up on them. And this only after 5 years of marriage. He traded gold for plastic. Tom b4ought her nothing but regret. Besides she had an 8 month long emotional affair and lied about it. She was too immature to be married. He did the right thing.

Ughh! He was right to cast her off, but the story is missing payback in Tom. Wasted read.

Why should Marky fight for the slut wife, that's bullshit. Divorce was the best route for Marky.

Honestly, Mark handled it the best possible way he could. Ditching her ultimately deprives her of the validation she is seeking from him, which will cause her tremendous emotional pain. As for Tom, while some sort of revenge would have made for an entertaining read, what should he have done? Violence would likely land him in jail or prison. Some elaborate scheme whereby he ruins Tom's life? Unrealistic. The ending here is realistic and satisfying.

best revenge is walking away and letting the other parties wonder if you're ever going to do something.

Great story!

Perfect. 5

Is his sister a complete idiot?.. . "you have to fight for her"... ma'am are you high?... that marriage was dead the minute she started, lying & sneaking around behind his back on little mini dates with her side dude🙄. So much so she started catching "feelings she wanted to explore".. while he's "fighting for her" what will SHE be doing?🧐.. he's fighting and she's getting her back blown out.. sounds like hell. you can't have only one person fighting for a marriage.. the other person have to want to save the marriage just as much as you do... it would've been 2 against the husband fighting for a dead marriage.. the MC hit the nail right on the head... he ABSOLUTELY shouldn't have to "fight for her". He did that when they were dating.. Why the hell would he STILL be "fighting for her" when they're married?. They've been married for 5yrs, WHEN can he stop fighting?. I would think the fight was over once they married. Is he supposed to fight for her everytime some cute guy smiles at her & her twat starts twitching?😕.. it's insane to just ask one party to fight for someone that isn't worthy of them..that lady been checked out of that marriage. what type of shit sister would tell her brother to fight for a slut, that clearly doesn't love him, doesn't respect him and want him to let her "explore" her feelings for another man & keep her husband as a backup plan in case shit doesn't work out?.. I absolutely hated his sister!.. I have 4 brother's, I would NEVER tell my damn brother to fight for some gutter slut.. his sister seemed to be on the sluts side for some baffling reason... she tried to mind fuck her brother, as if it's his fault his slut wife couldn't keep vows the bitch took.. she should've been telling jinny you need to "fight for him & your marriage" by keeping the vows you made and your legs close. I wanted to slap the silly heaux.. I'm actually shocked he didn't snap on his sister or looked at her in a different light. Would she pull the same bs on her own husband and actually expect him to "fight for her"? .. would SHE fight for her husband if he was cheating and expected her to just wait for him to "explore his feelings" for the slut he's seeing?.. what Jinny was doing was very much cheating.. just because they hadn't had sex (let her tell it🙄) that doesn't mean she wasn't cheating... cheating is more than just sex.. she was lying to her husband for probably months, going behind his back having little mini dates. She was able to come home to him and act like everything was normal. Then when caught... instead of begging him for forgiveness and getting her head out of her pussy, she really fixed her mouth to tell her husband she wants a chance to explore her feelings for this guy. I don't know any spouse with any self respect that would say, sure dear, I'll just sit here and watch some TV & wait until you've worked or fuck'd out those feelings. How long was she expecting him to wait to explore those feelings? What happens if she sleeps with him, likes it and wants to explore some more?. Why would anyone go through that instead of just getting rid of the shitty partner?. He did the right thing getting rid of her.. he would've never been able to trust her again. She kept saying she loved him, I screamed LIAR.. had she really loved him there's no way she would've put herself in this position. She would've told the guy to fuck off!. She didn't want him to fuck off. Damn her husband, damn her marriage, damn the vows, the dreams and plans... she's willing to risk it all.. that tells me this guy was way more important than her own husband..

This is still a 5***** story to me. This is what really happens - not a violent encounter on a dark parking lot. That immature wife is going to get a painful lesson in marriage.

"Men! You can't be that stupid! You have to fight for her love! You have to prove to her that you're the one she needs to be with!" - Fuck that! If he didn't already prove that he's the one, then she shouldn't have accepted his proposal!

This was a straight 5 from me.

Thanks for the tale

Mark did the right thing. Jinny wanted to “explore her feelings” for Tom, which is way beyond sex. She wants to be free to consider another man as her soulmate, unencumbered by her marriage and whatever “feelings” she has for Mark. Jinny is very immature, to say the least. Her lack of commitment to Mark is not a signal for him to “fight” for her; he cannot make her love him or commit herself to him. Her “exploration” of her “feelings” for another man should come after the divorce, not before. Nice little piece.

***** Absofuckinglutely!

Should be required reading for all the 304s running around out there.