All Comments on 'Figure 8 Ch. 04'

Not enough... Waiting for the next chapter :)

Please let us know when we can expect an update! Thanks

So soo sooooooo awesome! I can't wait to hear what happens next with them. Sylar sounds so flippin gorgeous!! Who was your inspiration??

I can't enough of this story!!! I hope the next update isn't too far away.

PLEASE do yourself and us a favour and get an editor. Punctuation, spelling and grammar errors are glaringly obvious as is the strange sentence structures. Take some pride in your work.

@anon. i will work harder on double checking/editing. i've been writing chapters ahead of time and reading them back with fresh eyes. as for sentence structures, that's how i write due to my bilingual and multicultural upbringing. it was my "signature style," back in college when i wrote with more experience and control, so it'll just take a while before it comes together again. as for pride... it'll probably infuriate you to hear that i am nowhere near close to feeling that with anything i write or do. like not even lick off my finger, let alone the ground, proud. BUT sincere thanks for being one of the first to scold me. it's probably a wakeup call that i need to hear.

@dbarbie. to be honest, i don't have a specific image of a man when it comes to sylar. boys i like are usually... not men (i used like the thin model, near dead types, and am just getting used to more physically masculine men). he's still just a fantasy to my hormones. but models' dgaf attitude is more on par with sylar than the masculine inspirations out there. so i guess it's a strange mix that i have yet to find. someone wildly intelligent that gives a fuck you to society but has the beauty that'll make feminists objectify them. :P

to everyone else. thank you for reading. next chapter should be submitted next week. i'm going on vacation, so i'll be writing or at least, brain storming. if anyone read my other work, a thousand cranes, i did submit a part two because i got emails asking me to finish it. so that should be up and out while i am away.

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This story has given me a fresh perspective on what it means to Be loving and faithful. True desire is in the mind. I love the way sylar thinks about Emma. He understands more about emma in a short time, while adam has had years and still hasnt quite figured her out. Eagerly anticipating her weekend get away with Sylar. I hope she evolves into a strong woman who is not afraid of asking for what she wants. Love your writing. Though many would disagree, From a fan's perspective, getting the story out there is more important than grammar and all that fluff. Eagerly looking forward to the next Installment. - K

Please write the next chapter soon!

Hey, I did notice a few errors in your writing but nothing that hindered me from reading and liking your story. I feel that the Anon who keeps posting about it is an idiot. This is your first story on here so there are going to be a few mistakes and if that Anon doesn't like it they should stop reading it. You are doing great. I really love the story.

Youve got me, really looking forward to the weekend now! Love the characters, cheers.

Chapter 5 was just submitted. I think it'll take about 6 days (seems the norm). There's not too much Sylar-Emma action in Ch 5, but I promise Ch 6 will be all them. Chapter 6 is also incredibly difficult to get right, so it might take some time before I submit that. But I'd still love to know your thoughts on the characters and their relationships :)

Thanks for much for your support! The fact that you guys like my story is my inspiration to continue.