All Comments on 'Filling the Holes'

well written good pov

Very very hot. I like that she also gets off on sam handling reed 's clock. Maybe try a bisexual mmf in future installments?

I appreciate the feedback - I am pleasantly surprised at the response to a first try! Thank you all for your support and thoughtful comments.

A very hot DP! Thank you!

Your story was written well from first person POV. The story flowed seamlessly and left me wanting to read more of your work.

thanks, short but very, very sweet....

As the previous comment pointed out, first person is a difficult beast to work with; even Graham Greene said it was so, and you have done a fine job with just this kind of material. Very well done, thank you for sharing your obvious talent with us and please bring us much more. Five stars seems hardly enough reward!

It isn't easy writing with this voicing but this is an excellent example of it when it is well done. Tight, crisp, slick. Clever horniness going on throughout.

I found this extremely hot and a wonderful way to start my day. Well done.