All Comments on 'Final Fantasies: Honeymoon'

Not a bad story but, for the next one spend some time cleaning up the typos and it will be a great story to read.

Great story! I play FFXI and realized right away the races you were talking about! I even recognized your server! I will be sure to look you up since I am also on Sylph.

How about a Mithra/Male Hume story?

Since you did not leave your name, I will reply to your comment here...

Thank you for the wonderful comment! I would love to explore the logistics of an inter racial couple in the world of FFXI, but, the pairing you sugested is considered beastiality, so will not be done... I may expand the Final Fantasies series with a male elvaan and a mithra (possibly one of Drachan's friends), we will see where the story takes me next.

Good luck and Altana Bless!! (lol)

Very nice story! I loved playing FFXI quite a few years ago. Very classy

and friendly online RPG. I love the other stand alone FF games as well!

a lot of spelling and grammar errors, but didnt detract from the overall enjoyment

Could stand a little editing, but a fun read. As a WOW-head myself, I enjoyed the fantasy.