by musicankane
dude i love this game. keep going i love the detail you put in to it. your storys are awsome.
It is such a great game, it is such a great story, and having read two novelizations of it and written one myself, I never get tired of a new interpretation of Squaresoft's greatest stroke of genius. Enjoy writing it, I'll enjoy reading it.
ur damn right this is the best game ever, and a good intro for it too, nice job man
I do like it, but does it actually belong here?
I think it was well written and you do go into a lot of detail, and you made it "your own".
I thought in this section it was "Erotic" this story isn't that, although I would like to say, it is a good story, hope to read more!
This is a mad ass story i would say its almost as good as the game but i really think it dont belong in an erotic section there are actual sites which allow you to put your final fantasy stories on them but none the less awsome story keep up the good work