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josephstevensover 11 years agoNice!
Enjoyed that! Nice story...seems strange they waited so long for something they both wanted so much! Good description, though...and arousing.
hathorbr1over 11 years agoNice Story, but...
I would consider this an entry for erotic couplings and not romance being that the characters were both married and it was pretty much just a booty call! But still a great story.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThis is so bad on so many levels
Just horrible writing. Flipping back and forth between past and present tenses, outrageously wrong word choices ("meeting my strides"?)... Well. It was just a train wreck.
Here's hoping you stop writing altogether.
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