by TooManyXs
I’m so tired of overly long ENF stories, it’s nice to find a character ready, willing and able to get it out there. Also, I was hoping to see Carol go back to work and resume her life in her new state. Now you’re hinting there’s more to come! Yay!
I'd honestly love a story about Mindy finding her own path to Zenrism! I think that could be very compelling.
Loved this story! I can understand why some people would prefer it to be one long story instead of it being in parts, but for me, it made it easier to digest and I kept coming back to read the next chapter of the story. Great work!
Excellent story, dId not "stir my flame" as a guy, but I was captivated enough to read it until the conclusion.
Just brilliant !
Loved the word play with Beringall, bit like Dylan Thomas with Llareggub........
Well worth more than 5 Stars.
Rapier
As you said, very long, but a great read too. But you have to follow this up with what happens next.
Erin and Mindy will certainly becomes Zenrists and have sex with their mother. Henri and Katy will also do the same. Maybe even Erin's friend Meghan. I was surprised that anal sex didn't seem to feature.
A really good story worthy of publishing.