All Comments on 'Finding My Way Home Ch. 01'

"thru" is for SMS

"through" is for literature................

Good start, hope the next chapter arrives soon.

This has the makings of a great story, all i ask is that you avoid your natural inclination to go down the BDSM route,

not enough love stories on here, thanks

it was hard then and harder now. TK U MLJ LV NV ps this story could grow on DE76 fans mlj

Grow a set. Post your stupid ass English grammar/spelling lessons with your user ID. Or better yet, join the editors and help a fellow writer out. However posting snide comments about some silly mistake??? Jesus man, do you do it because you have a small dick? Low self-esteem? Whatever the hell it is, get over yourself! Put yourself out here like this author has.

To the author. Thank you. I like your writing and your character development is truly excellent.

So far

Cordite's heyday as the substance that makes a gun go bang started in the late 1800s and ended with the close of World War II. Never used in Afghanistan.

Looking forward to reading more

Good start. very interesting.

Single Mom. Abort.