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Click hereLily took Lauren's hand. "Honey, what do you think of Jon becoming your father and living here?"
She looked at me and then at her mother. She shrugged her shoulders. "I thought he already was."
Lily started laughing at that and we all joined in. Out of the mouths of babes!
And so I ended up with the girl of my dreams from my high school days. It was a tough journey, but I know we're going to make it. After all, we've already been through more than most couples will in their entire lives.
Oh, yes, we have a daughter on the way. We're going to name her Cindy.
Had to kill off the one who was wife material to get him back with the broken bitch. Who caused the death of his girlfriend. He deserves raising more kids from other dudes, her "bad boy" kink should be kicking off soon. A fitting sequel for the loving wives section. It's full of pretend alpha dudes who always end up as simps and cucks so he will fit right in. The dude kept simping over a girl who sent killers after him, a bit of cucking is nothing compared to that
I finished reading it, but disappointed with the direction of the story after Cindy was killed. Lilly would have been an accessory to Manslaughter and attempted murder and would have gone to jail, probably for life, and it would be in the law's hands. Lauren would have been a better direction to pursue and Lilly should have been the lost soul. Maybe.
Agree with previous comment- Cindy should not have died!!
Lily and her mother can go fuck themselves
It was a bullshit move to kill off Cindy, just to clear her away so he could get back with Lily, which he never should have done under the circumstances. Would have been far better to just work toward a reconciliation without the killing.
5 stars.
Excellent story. I found the belting scene disturbing, maybe a bit extreme, but not out of character.
Don't we all unjustly lash out at the ones we claim to love some times?
And don't we all lose our temper and go way beyond our normal behaviour some times?
Aren't we all a mixed blend of good, cloaking our evil side.
Well written story, love, loss, drama and finally love that leads to a new family and then a happily ever after. A well deserved 5 stars
But somehow they fit. The belting was the carthartic point for the story and the awkward measurement of our "hero." I was disturbed that the author did not write in more despair over Cindy's death and killing Buck's relatives. I would think he would be an almost comatose mess from this. Single mothers are frighteningly emotional and often respond illogically to threats to their child; in this regard Lily's actions in sending Buck to Cindy's house and not calling law enforcement are deplorable but believable. His horror over belting Lily could have provided some balancing in his mind for her role in Cindy's death but it's hard picturing the bouncy happy ending after everything. Still, it's just a story and has to get someplace eventually. A 5 for the storytelling.