All Comments on 'Finding Someone'

by Chiapet97

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BillyslateBillyslateabout 3 years ago

Nice First Story!

Maybe you should consider a CH. 02, since this story was well written although a bit brief. The storyline was a bit off the norm for Lesbian Romance, therefore interesting.

Definitely Rated 5*-Stars As A 1st Story🎉.

AyaaChannAyaaChannabout 3 years ago

Great story!

I would have liked more dialogue instead of the description of what happened.

But still really good! I like the way you write the story. 5 stars from me :)

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