All Comments on 'Finding the Perfect Fit Pt. 01'

This is part of a larger story and will be updated weekly. And yes, there will be action in future parts. I hope you enjoyed reading this and will stick around to see what happens next!

before you publish the next one have someone proof read it first this was not to bad for the first time

Looking forward to more.

Patiently waiting..... Well not so patiently. Great start. I didn't find any mistakes that slowed me down, although I don't read transgender stories with the intent of becoming an editor. Keep up the good work, I enjoyed it.

Anonymous - I published the story on a whim when I should have given it another editing pass. The intention is for it to read slightly rough, as it's being written by a college student not familiar with more creative writing. I'll polish up future releases however and hope you continue to read them.

rdoolittle - Worry not, there is more coming and I hope they are to your liking!

Angus74 - I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope the once a week upload pace is often enough. There's plenty to come...

I liked it and will continue reading if you continue writing.

I like your writing style, love the character development. I will definitely keep reading!

It’s always an exciting reward when I read such an engrossing story, and know there are many more chapters just waiting for me!

Great start .... love the main characters. Thank you Joshana!

I'm sure glad that Gen started a diary. Ohhh My, Jamie with 36C's....Chtistine can only dream.. Thx for sharing this thread.

I was thoroughly absorbed in the story. Lovely writing, it flows very well.