All Comments on 'Finding the Right One'

This is one helluva great “there is someone for everyone” love story with total respect as well.

The old style which works for me.

Made me hard when he finally went down on her.

Well done

John

I won't bother checking all your submissions, but this is two out of two, and you really need some help with your dialogue. [FLAME alert] REAL PEOPLE DO NOT TALK LIKE THIS.

Your dialogue reads like a computer manual, or something translated from Russian to Chinese to English. Have you honestly read your pieces back and thought, "Yep, that's perfect!" Because, sorry to say, they ain't!

A real romance story. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Sweet, but was it written by AI?