All Comments on 'Fine Line Ch. 01'

Nice build up. Enjoyed the climax.

Great scenario. Can't wait to read more

hope to see more soon

I just finished reading your story and wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it. I hope you continue writing in the same styles you have so far. If so, I will continue to be a reader for quite some time. I eagerly await your next installment of either series, until then I remain..

-Just @ Fan

Two people always at odds with each other find they are attracted to each other. A very interesting read as the Writer does a clever balancing act between angry and lust.