All Comments on 'Fingered in a Stairwell'

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CucumberLemonadeCucumberLemonade10 months ago

This….

Just made my heart ache in longingness.

It wasn’t rough. It wasn’t anything brute.

It was sexy, it was hot, not so public but the adrenaline of being caught was sure there.

A well played game for the both of them.

And that ending, is just lovely. 🌷

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Interesting premise.

Needed some invovement with her breasts. Certainly needed them bared and played with.

Needed more dialog during pussy fingering.

Do you like it? Are you ready to cum? Can you feel how hard I am for you? Would you like to touch me?

Some touching/teasing of her asshole would have been nice too.

Sort of disappointing that she was already his sub.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I liked it so much that I read it twice. And your other stories too, of course. Very visual, I enjoyed your writing.

Hope to read more in the future.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Hot, and the aftercare was very sweet!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Please finish your other story

merrySMmerrySM8 months ago

Great. until the end. Really dislike the ending. Always feels like a ripoff in the non con category.

AlefbihAlefbih8 months ago

Whoaaaah what a fun one

m1km1n30m1km1n306 months ago

Aftercare the way she needed it. Good Dom.

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