by bratattack
This….
Just made my heart ache in longingness.
It wasn’t rough. It wasn’t anything brute.
It was sexy, it was hot, not so public but the adrenaline of being caught was sure there.
A well played game for the both of them.
And that ending, is just lovely. 🌷
Interesting premise.
Needed some invovement with her breasts. Certainly needed them bared and played with.
Needed more dialog during pussy fingering.
Do you like it? Are you ready to cum? Can you feel how hard I am for you? Would you like to touch me?
Some touching/teasing of her asshole would have been nice too.
Sort of disappointing that she was already his sub.
Four stars.
I liked it so much that I read it twice. And your other stories too, of course. Very visual, I enjoyed your writing.
Hope to read more in the future.
Great. until the end. Really dislike the ending. Always feels like a ripoff in the non con category.