All Comments on 'Finn Ch. 12: Naked'

Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!

Just enough to satisfy me and not too much to give it ALL away.

Viva Chapter 13!

This was a very different chapter than anything that has gone before and well written as usual particularly as there was no bdsm scenes. No clues to the next chapter which in a way I found disappointing because I like trying to anticipate. You seem to have had the first few chapters already written before you submitted them but now are taking more time because you are developing the story and it’s working. You have managed to keep the same level of quality in your writing throughout. Beautiful continuation of the story so far.

In my opinion, this is a fabulous story and I agree it is one of the best I have read anywhere, not just on this site. I just finished reading all 12 chapters while I was on vacation and I love it. Thank you for writing and sharing it and I hope you will continue with it.