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- Fire & Ice
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Click hereI stared at him in shock. That couldn't be true.
"Don't shake your head at me, Ian. I killed her. We had sex, my powers manifested, and she died."
His face was so serious and his eyes so incredibly sad I couldn't stand it. I wrapped my arms around him.
"Paolo... she didn't deserve to die, but you didn't murder her. You didn't kill anybody, baby."
His arms slid around my waist and we held each other in the ruins of the kiln. We were still standing there, nude, streaked with grime and covered in dust when Michael opened the door five minutes later.
"You two good?"
Paolo looked at me. "Will you join the Strakos Clan? Marry me?"
My heart fluttered and my stomach turned over. Sure, it was quick, and the few friends I had would flip out, but I knew given what just happened that nobody else in the world would ever make me feel like Paolo Strakos. I nodded.
"Yes. I will."
He turned to Michael, that mischievous half-smile pulling at the left side of his mouth.
"Gather up my cousins and clear out this rubble. We're not anywhere close to being done tonight."
Michael's laughter followed him from the kiln as I pressed my lips to Paolo's, breathing my icy breath into the fire of his mouth for the sweetest kiss of my life.
- COMMENTS
BigBlueyezover 4 years agoThat was a really good story. It definitely needs a second chapter!
shatteredmindxoabout 7 years agoBeautiful story especially with the added twist.
I hope we could see Michael and Denny's too.
lonesomedove66over 7 years agoI am a bit behind the times but I loved this story. Very different, erotic but I agree leave them with the HEA they achieved
Susanlynnabout 8 years agoThis may very well be the best story I've ever read in my many years of surfing Literotica. I work with my husband at his business and I'm headed to his office right now. He's either going to fuck me there or take me home and fuck me. Thanks Tucker, you've made me so fucking horny. I've got to have cock in my little gurl pussy NOW !!!! Please give us more adventures like this one! Fucking 10 stars!!!
johnnyreyabout 8 years agoWow. What a great story. I enjoyed it so much. As a bottom boy I'd love to be with both of these men. ;)
TuckerMcCallahanabout 8 years agoAuthorThank you for the kind words, and for taking the time to leave comments.
First, this is a stand-alone story. I gave some thought to continuing it... I even spoke to my current beta at length about it. But here's the thing. These two have gotten their HEA. As the story ends now, they are happy with their whole lives ahead of them. If I continue to write them, I will be forced to do what I do best, which is plot like a motherfucker. And that means since my characters are happy, I will have to take that happy away, and make them work to get it back - and they may not get this happy back. They may end up with some other happy that arises through the natural progression of character and plot. I honestly do not think anybody wants to go through the angst, misery, pain, and in the case of these two - DESTRUCTION - that me writing more would produce. So please enjoy Ian and Paolo as they are, and know that I'll be posting more stories to keep your appetites sated.
Second, yes. I am writing (and editing) again. I'm still working full-time, and my house is a bit of a natural disaster (large poly households are usually one good incident away from def-con 4), but I *am* writing. I'll have a book out in the next year, and re-issues of several of my older (and up-until now out-of-print) novels. I'll keep my biography updated, and you can always check my blog, A Little Something... Wicked.
Thanks again for this story's awesome reception. I sincerely appreciate it.
Be Well ~
Tucker
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI follow your blog, enjoy your work, and appreciate your editing skills for other exceptional authors. I have read this before, and although I always viewed this story as a well written stand alone... Can I now admit I would love to read more of these two as they find their way forward? Either way, so happy to see this post!
geemeedeeabout 8 years agoI've read this great story before, so I know it's standalone. Might I hope you're gonna write again?
