All Comments on 'Fire and Ice Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sigh

Please dont punish us for christmas too.. let us have it plzzzzzzzz

TocoHillTocoHillover 6 years ago
More, More, More!!!!

Very hot. Would like more character development though. That said, 5* šŸ˜€

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

All I want for Christmas is Ch. 3!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
damn

i felt alex's frustration as my own at the end and i'm so curious and so thrilled by this. please more!!!

Thumper3340Thumper3340over 6 years ago
Ok Iā€™m hooked

Alright already get to chapter 3 for heavens sake šŸ˜œ

Bridget69Bridget69over 6 years ago
Clare sure doesn't like...

to cuddle after sex. lol! I wonder why she always takes but never gives but I understand why Alex keeps going back for more. Hopefully, she'll be on the receiving end next time.

QRD23QRD23over 6 years ago

Loved it cant wait for ch 3 but i NEED MORE THAN ONE PAGE!!!

Taurus03Taurus03over 6 years ago
Great follow up

Pleaseee! Write part 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Beautiful

Really nice. Its always sad when ur stories are done. Beautifully written.

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 6 years ago

Just as erotic as the first one. When is Clare going to reciprocate?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
whew

ah damn such a tease!

stroudlestroudleover 6 years ago
Wow

Another hot one. Clare is such a tease but im dying to find out if alex can keep her cool. A bit more about the characters would be nice but i am really really enjoying this and carnt wait for chapter 3. Hope its just as fast paced and sexy

Thank you for not making us wait too long.

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