All Comments on 'Fire and Ice Pt. 03'

Love the fast pace of this. A page or 2 more would be nice though. But thats just me being greedy.

Please write chapter 4 soon as i want to see if clare ever opens up to alex.

This has become one of my favourite series, please continue.

What a story, and what characters! You are so effing creative!

oh what to do, what to do will she come back or stay away from a married woman guess we will find out

it's killing me or made me like alex hyperventeleting as to what come next..as to the progress of this story I hope a good ending will quench the thirst of my longing heart.please don't left us hanging for too long.I AM BEGGING PLEASE.(cinder)DD

I dont know how u do it..... but its like watching a movie... as i said i'd buy a book... this is absolutely well written. . And the time that you took to write it makes me feel like its actually a bit true / real...

Please please please dont stop writing this series anytine soon.. you're so good nexxus . Mmmm so fucking good.

Love it but I agree its maddeningly short - you've got the talent to keep us up all night sitting on the edge of our seats. Cant wait for next chapter...

LNC

I love it but im going to need more than one page i just want to keep reading!

Please more soon, like very soon. I love this story.

Their whole ‘thing’ is going to way too fast. First it’s you’re so fucking hot and I’m hot, obviously, so let’s fuck in your office. And it was like some hit it and quit it type shit. Next it’s okay I don’t normally go for seconds but- fuck it, let’s do this. Wait, why all the fucking questions? We had sex, like, once and you’re acting like this a full blown relationship. Geez, fucking U-Hauling that shit you fucking stereotype. Then it’s I’m in love with you even though we only did it twice and the only interaction we’ve had so far was when I was screwing you. Wait, you’re married? I can’t believe it ( seriously? because she basically had I’m Married stamped on her fucking forehead). Oh, god, I’m having a panic attack.

This girl has some serious problems. So unhealthy. I’m not trying to be rude and I’m not dissing your ability to write or whatever. This is just my opinion on the protagonist and the situation as a whole.

Thank you for the great Xmas gift!!! This story is so right! Although I prefer longer stories, the short length of this story builds the anticipation!

A

I just wish there were more pages

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please chapter 4. I'll do anything. .. youre writing my ultimate fantasy. ... like perfectly. .. oh man nexxuss

Alex needs help and a happier ending. It's really rough falling hard for someone you can't have. Loved the story and build up, Clare is fascinating...need to know what happens next please!

its been like over 10 days .... 3 part series ???? more like a fucking major heart break... i've never been so fucking sad in my life i swear

Okay.... I am so late for work and don't care. That's how good this series is. PLEASE continue. Please please please.

Plzzz can you make it longer !

Love itt

When is the next part ? Cant wait , is there another. Loving it so far

Can you at least tell us when the next episode comes out?

great story thank you please send us chapter four five and six asap need to know what happened next please

Been waiting impatiently for 4 months... please give us more of Clare and Alex!

3 pages of liquid heat and then...crickets... Really hoping to add you as a new favorite; new pages of Clare & Alex would help.

I loved this story the first time I read it and now the second.. please write more!

Need more please. 😢

OF COURSE I find a great story to get sucked into, and just as it's getting good I realise... it was written 2 years ago and also' s unfinished. Smh. That would happen to me. PLEASE TELL ME YOU'RE STILL WORKING ON THIS?

..................... just like "anonymous" I found what could`ve been a great story, then nothing.