Fire in the Water

Holy shit if there ever was a story that begged for, no demanded, a follow up it is this one. No author should ever leave his/her readers hanging like that. They have an all consuming fire to to know what the characters did further.

more-so for their loved ones on shore. TK U MLJ LV NV

Is She the village cockpit? Wow shock and awe factor yes! Anyway Love you all! Bye. Greg.

If she was that gun ho to get something and/or some relationship, then she should of said something and not hooked up with someone new.

not all men are silver tongued or able to talk shit just to get in a womans nickers...he was respectful to her until that other cock waving jerk showed up...glad he hooked up with her in the end....finished all to soon...needed to be expanded a bit more...nice one though

Some of us men are some thick - we just never think we are good enough -

Then there are the gold plated assholes who think they are too good and they are mostly piles of crap heh

And yet the species survives - so far.

Nice one

I agree it's too abrupt but I hit that darn submit button instead of review again while I was still working on it.

Oh well, maybe I will write a second chapter.

Thanks,

MGM

The only thing I didn't like was the abrupt ending. Thanks for the post.