All Comments on 'Fire in the Water'

The only thing I didn't like was the abrupt ending. Thanks for the post.

I agree it's too abrupt but I hit that darn submit button instead of review again while I was still working on it.

Oh well, maybe I will write a second chapter.

Thanks,

MGM

Some of us men are some thick - we just never think we are good enough -

Then there are the gold plated assholes who think they are too good and they are mostly piles of crap heh

And yet the species survives - so far.

Nice one

not all men are silver tongued or able to talk shit just to get in a womans nickers...he was respectful to her until that other cock waving jerk showed up...glad he hooked up with her in the end....finished all to soon...needed to be expanded a bit more...nice one though

If she was that gun ho to get something and/or some relationship, then she should of said something and not hooked up with someone new.

Is She the village cockpit? Wow shock and awe factor yes! Anyway Love you all! Bye. Greg.

more-so for their loved ones on shore. TK U MLJ LV NV

Holy shit if there ever was a story that begged for, no demanded, a follow up it is this one. No author should ever leave his/her readers hanging like that. They have an all consuming fire to to know what the characters did further.