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sam77sam77sam77sam77over 3 years ago

It is really exciting story. If you want a constructive feedback, next time you you can focus more on description and action, less on discussion between characters. But it is really good even so!

My tips for other stories: You said that she likes to show off her body to anyone that wants to look. Can you describe the situations? I look forward to next stories!

TomSavageIsFakeTomSavageIsFake11 months ago

Loved it. Consider making it a little more mysterious. I'd also like more details about this couple, reference to other crazy actions.

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Following a very naughty text conversation with a female work colleague she suggested that I should consider writing something a little more structured. She told me that not only did my writing turn her on whilst we were texting, but that she would read our chats again later ...