All Comments on 'Firebug'

brilliant can't wait for the next chapter

Excellent combination of SciFi and erotica. Very well done, as usual.

I think my favorites of yours (so far) are 'A Ghost of a Chance' and 'Angelic Salvation'.

Keep up the EXCELLENT writing, please!!!

This is excellent so far. Please email me when you update. I can't wait to read more. =]

bernadette003@sbcglobal.net

Thanks!

~B~

The premise and idea are very interesting. However, you misspelled words, left out letters, etc. You would really benefit from an editor. Don't give up on the story, though!

This is an amazing story! I totally loved it!

Cool story!! This may actually be a new favorite!

I loved this story! I really wanted to rate it a 5, but there were so many spelling errors that they were distracting. Even so, you have to add another chapter. The descriptions were great. And the imagination...finish the story! Please!!!

great story -- erotic and hauntingly sad!

Loved it and can't wait for the next section.

This is an excellent first chapter with the means to become a wonderful novel....Can't wait to read more about Gem and Firebug along with other supers.

This is a really great story; it's so original with great characters.

Like some others are saying though, the spelling and grammatical errors are distracting.

But I guess it would be hard after writing 100 pages. xD

I can't wait for the next chapter, hope it comes out soon!

THE CONTINUED STORY ANYWHERE!!!

You don't understand that I NEED to finish reading this.

This is just NOT fair! I have read all of your other stories but ONE, and this dear friend, is NOT fair. I'm dyinggg!

amazing!

i wish u would post more!

The story was amazing and caught my attention right from the start. It is certainly one that would be difficult to put down. Can't wait to read more.

o wow my favorite of all your stories you had me with the Japanese culture since i love those things also. i don't care about the errors because it was still readable and that's all that matters. keep up the good work and please post the other chapters soon

I love your writing, and this is not an exception. If anything it's better because I want to read the rest now even if its long. I like lengthy stories, there's more in the plot and it makes it better. I like the idea of the supes and humans living together.

Man tht was hot really hot ,i hope no ,no ,no , i pray tht u write th next instal soon coz th story is captivating loved it write more soon ,thankies

It needs some serious editing but it's a great story :) those two are hot together :) write more pls.

A wonderful story, a romance that will bloom into radiant beauty and a powerful world to build upon. I could hear the engine of the hover cars and see a bedroom of glass and steel. I can't wait to read more of your story.

Just work on spelling otherwise great!

I don't know how I missed this story earlier, but after reading it today all I can say is more, please!!! This was a great start and I can't wait to see where it goes.

I cannot wait till you with the next one !

My title explains it all

I wish your spelling was better! Every typo knocked me out of the story, which is a real shame as it's a great idea.

Great storyline and characters. Don't want to wait. lol

Loved the story, i can´t wait to read more, please add more chapters :)

love the story so far hope you do more cant wait for it !!

I really would love to see this continued. It was a really great piece with the creativity and great characters.

a truly brilliant piece of fantasy one i would love to see continued if possible

i hope you do continue to finish it as it has a great story line as well as appealing to both gay and fantasy readers

Fascinating story! Please continue the story!!!

You MUST continue you this story it's so good😁

I loved each person's aura and the way they acted or handled themselves. I would love to read more, PLEASE, continue on with this story. Five star in the making.

Original, which is not easy to say about most stuff around here. It's got a genre feel, but the diversity of genres is magic. I would love to edit for you; catch the mechanics without out changing your unique voice or style of writing. From one who has struggled to craft, I give you respect & props. It's so good, if you never write another, my imagination will do it without assistance. Firebug has resonance.

Does anyone know where I can find more of this story?