All Comments on 'First'

An almost mystical rendering of the first time encounter of two women who dip their toes into the well of lesbian activities. Very sensuous and erotic. Well Written! Enjoyable Read!

Though the lack of names was a bit of an annoyance. Thankfully, there weren't many characters, because it could easily get to the point where it's difficult to remember gender without checking the context and scrolling. The author also switched from past to future tense on numerous occasions and seems to have a liking for irrelevant sentence fragments. Nonetheless, it's still a good read, if a bit short and somewhat rushed.

Thank You for this wonderful story.

I really licked the pace and the description of a new love that is just starting.

I hope for the two girls that they will love each other for more time, discovering a new world of tenderness that only a woman embrace can offer.

Intriguing