All Comments on 'First and Last'

I'm a fan of the friends-to-lovers development, but not at all of the mother/daughter thing.

The story didn't need any of that except to stir up mud.

Another excellent story from a talented writer.

Fairytale sweet and sexy, with a just splash of Greek style drama a la Aeschylus. A treat to read. Thanks very much

Well written young love story. The mother angle just added spice to an excellent story.

Very good story! Very much an enjoyable red! Thank -you

Truly excellent! As always though, your protagonist is ridiculously mature and insightful. I’m not even approaching his level of maturity and balance, and I’m in my 5th decade !!!

I found this to be excellent! Thank you!

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Be well!

Well done, sweet story.

That was a wonderful story. I always hope the good stories last longer, another hundred pages should be good for this one!

Normally I hang in less optimistic corners of lit - I may get out more.

This story requires the sex scenes... often they are gratuitous. Here, they carry most of the emotion.

Good job.

Green-something

Excellent story! 5 stars.

You just keep knocking them out of the park. 5*

First of yours I’ve read, pretty sure your pen name is incorrect, thanks

You never know where or when you will find love!

5

This was a picturesque story of the ideal first time for a woman, and as such, I loved it.

The drama with the mother was a crazy spice that I didn't expect, but NTH is addicted to drama, and it always adds something special to his stories.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Awesome, NTH! Still say your misnomer is "B.S." , Loved this one!

Wonder if there will ever be any children who get to hear the story of how Gabe screwed their grandma? Now that would really be an offbeat story for Lit. Nonetheless, five full stars for this sweet little confection!

Another beautiful story.

Thanks

One of your best efforts, a lot packed into 3 pages. Well done.

What the hell is wrong with you Cal59? NTH is one of the top 3 writers currently posting here. This, amazingly, is not even his best work and I still loved it. He just doesn't regurgitate the cuckold bullshit so prevalent on this site.

Another great one! Thank you!

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So much joy here.

Great story - lovely concept, thoughtfully and maturely written, beautifully articulate, and not a typo to be found anywhere - outstanding!

nice!

Entertaining story - original as far as what I have read on the site, which is a little rare in the LW category.

Great story. To the Anonymous poster who had a problem with Cal59, if you actually read his comment you'll see that it's a compliment (he's saying the author is NOT a NoTalentHack).

Excellent story. One for the ages.

Wonderful story. Sexy and romantic at the same time. Heart warming and soul satisfying. Thanks for this gift.

A beautiful story completing the circle for all three of them.

I really, really like the way this story was laid out. Your pacing is excellent. The intro sets up a scenario to get me to care about Gabe, you bring in Jess with a meet cute that works well for the characters, you give the background in a way that allows the crush with an age gap without making it weird or creepy, and then you deliver some nice steam in the smutty parts. The slight fast forward to the end works for the story, and the dialogue overall was really nicely done.

You're an excelent story teller and you can write in any category without loosing quality. I'm allways looking forward to read your next work. Thank you.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Good luck in the contest.

Sir, you do have a way with words. As soon as I saw this I knew I would enjoy it. Thanks again for sharing with us.

An old curmudgeon

Excellent!

Another fantastic tale from the quite talented NTH!

Great read. This story needs, at a minimum, a follow-up to their budding relationship.

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Hi, NTH, excellent tale with an interesting backstory. It was well written by a true Talent. Best wishes in the contest.

Great!

I can't get past him having a sexual relationship with her mom and then moving on to one with her. Just can't do it. It put a grimace on my face that wouldn't go away, so I stopped reading halfway through. To be honest I'm pretty grossed out.

To the person who commented above that they were “grossed out because he had a previous sexual relationship with her mom”, wait to check out the rest of this site!!! You are going to need a couple of buckets on standby and shit ton of time set aside for therapy!! 😂

Oh Most Talented Hack... The biggest problem that I see with your stories is that they have to end. 5 Stars all day!

Very enjoyable read. Refreshingly tender in the way you tell the story. Beautifully done, thanks for sharing. A very enthusiastic 5 stars!

Nice premise.

But sex starts and proceeds much too fast.

One minute touch of his cock and she puts her mouth on it.

No exploration of his cock and balls. No trying to figure out if she likes playing with them? No trying to see how he likes what she's doing? And what he likes the best?

She shaved her pussy for him because she thought he'd like it. He says he does. Why does HE have to be the one to to suggest he demonstrate how much? Better if she'd have suggested it.

Three stars.

Truly a lovely tale. 5*.

Excellent story, enjoyed reading it