All Comments on 'First BBC'

If at first you don't succeed. Didn't get more than a few paragraphs into it and knew where it was headed, full of nothing but worn out black/white cliche's. If you're going to submit more stories in the IR category, perhaps try another racial group, there are others you know. The black man white woman begging for his cock is not only bullshit, the theme is over used and abused.

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Hopefully he gave her a momento of their fucking--a black baby bump

Excellent writing and story telling. This is what it's all about (sexual conflict) STORY. You've got it because you've done it. Now do it again. No matter whatever anyone says be it negative or positive make your magic and never stop. Practice makes perfect!

GREAT STORY!!!! I WOULDN'T CHANGE THING. I WISH MORE WRITERS WROTE LIKE YOU. I LIKE YOUR STYLE KEEP THEM COMING. A BLACK GOD!!

This could have written with any race in mind. A women left by her husband goes out get laid. Black or not, same result. But do you really hear cum splat on shoes when you walk outside a busy nightclub?

hopefully he left her a bump and they meet up again when she is showing and wearing pantyhose over her baby belly from him

What a great story! Loved it from beginning to end.

Got what she needed and hopefully a black baby bump.

Why do haters read this section? She got what she needed, a big black cock. Her husband may not find himself, but she has found herself. There is never anything wrong when a woman gets good sex.

I am happy when my wife returns happy with a full pussy!

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great . A good night had by all . I wonder if it was good thoughts or a happy experience